Once day at the garden city, i saw a man who is very kind and handsome. I was sofascinated by him. When i saw him, all eyes on her he helped old women who wanted to cross the road and that’s made me want to know him more closely.
When i arrived at home i immediately put my body in bed. His face came on my sleep, but instantly i awake and praying for the hanger my self. The next morning i saw the clock is showing at 06.00 and i woke up from my bed to shower and have breakfast with my mother.
Arriving in class i tired to do about the matter. Tap shoes and my teacher came. She said that our class would be the arrival of new student. I was shocked when a learned that new student is a man who did not disturb my sleep last night. “oooohh God, what do you approach to me?.”
My heart beats faster when he was going to take a seat in biside of me wanted to run away from my seat. But my heart refused. Finally i succes to get close to him and know him. I’m very happy. I really enjoyed my day. This is the story appealead to me.
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I don't find any participles in your paragraphs. REVISE it.
give underline your participles
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